News: Nightly Update 06/22/2009

I apologize that the "nightly update" hasn't been as nightly as it should be recently. I haven't been feeling spectacular for the past few days. Getting better now though.

I made some big changes to several chapters today, mostly because some of my characters have changed a bit and they were changes I couldn't afford to make later.

Of note for people who have been following the manuscript:

Ophelia, the girl with no memory at the Viccars, has been rolled into the boy formerly called Peter. He is now called Cane suffers from the old Ophelia's malady. He isn't going home any time soon.

There's a *new* Ophelia, but it's a character that we've already met, namely the the girl from Caravan that gives Grim the portentious message about the wolf. In an effort to add some complexity to the story she is also now Grim's age instead of being a little girl. Supplies a nice bit of added...tension.

Anyway, I'll repost everything starting from Chapter 4 tomorrow, and I recommend rereading all of them when I repost. Some things have definitely changed.